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The pale skin man
By: salem_bastet

The man with pale skin
Dark sunken eyes
Black hair 
Long straight hair
He is quiet like air

The man with pale skin
Clothes is all black
Seductive 
Mysterious
His facial complexion is stiff and serious

The man with the pale skin
Hunger for lust
Hunger for desire
Underneath all the seriousness and darkness
He's very amours 




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That's quite a striking portrait you painted. The pale man with dark eyes really sets the stage. Sounds like a very lonely and gothic character. Almost tortured within himself. It was a short poem but it says so much more. I can respect your creativity on this one. This definitely has me wondering ...


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