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my first poem on here so dont bully me heheheh

I.W.Y

I did not believe in love
You melted my heart with those humbug-brown eyes
You lit a fire in me, kiss me

The jewel forever playing in my mind
How can you be in disbelief when I confess 
Your arms keep me safe 
Your smile keeps me warm 
Your stare bewitches my stubborn soul, kiss me

Upon your arrival, I forget everyone else
Allow me to admire you at every fleeting moment together
You know what to express as if you read my mind before 
Opening those peach lips, kiss me

Your Aura is home 
At that moment the urge to stroke your gilded locks is nearly impossible to not act upon
And your consent only encouraged every desire 
In your sturdy chest that is a sanctuary, i long to rest; kiss me

Can you sense my shallow rapid breaths 
Or my trembling limbs
Can you see me at all
Is it not clear that i want you 
More than as a friend?
Kiss me


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This is a really Beautiful piece. Reading it remind me of the feeling of falling in love. Keep writing!  Based off of this alone you seem to know how to build imagery really well!



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Thank you so much Mystic! That is exactly what i wanted the reader to capture. it is a personal poem so im glad you liked it! More to come.


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