some of my favorite self written poems,share yours

Question

I say this with a heavy heart

A cumbersome and heavy heart lies in my chest

It pushes all my organs down for it is the heaviest

My lungs are in my stomach

And my intestines are in my thighs

My brain is in my neck

And I can not feel my eyes

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My solitude drowns me within itself

Your optimism drowning out the real world

My aura as grainy as sand and shells

You only isten to what youre told

Dont open the door no matter how much banging you hear

Now listen to me and my quarrel

Come closer come near

As i whisper these sweet nothings to you

Don’t open my heart no matter how much pain your know

Now hear my words and listen closely

I dont know why but i love you so

No matter how much i pretend i don’t

You turn the gears of my heart

Yet they turn the wrong direction

Your mouth a dart

And my lungs the board

i dont know why i love

Melodic tunes of your heartbeat

Take my pain and comfort me

You calm my oceans and stop the waves

You halt tsunamis and dig new graves

For my limp body you hold in your arms

Youre a king putting up new guards

Just to protect me

Why? I dont see

But if you continue

I may begin to love you

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Wow. I really like these. The diction is superb. Def some of the best ive seen on the internet at least. :)

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