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so i think a lot of us that have been in the fandom for a long time were a little disappointed by the level of development the story was at in SB :^( so i was thinking of writing an AU :^D i was planning to make it five nights but more like SL with a focus on a different character each night

characters:
gregory - robot cc theory, sorry if thats controversial but i think its a good story :^P
freddy - hes micheal and his personality is more tired but always helpful at his own expense
sun - true daycare attendant, actually has personality and interactions
moon - also a true daycare attendant, just more strict with rules
chica - star celebrity, always ready for a photo op and loves the kids
monty - chatty and quick witted, i imagine his golf skills make him very calculated
roxy - competitive and self absorbed (basically the same as in current game, she actually had character)
vanny and william - cartoonishly evil, i just think its fun

the afton virus exaggerates their traits to be manipulative and lure gregory to afton rather than making him attack directly.

if this was an entirely new game, id want a choice each night to either save the animatronic of the night from the afton virus or to decommission them. im just gonna write the save options tho bc that would lead to the true ending.

anyone have any ideas? not entirely sure on how each night would go with interactions and updating the current game to be more engaging and atmospheric. super hard figuring out the details of the nights bc theres nearly no content with the animatronics individually, let alone interactions that take their character into account.

this is made out of love for the series and a passion for the new characters in SB to be able to see them written to their full potential <3

would love to hear what yall have to say! :^)


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personally, im not too keen on the gregory robot theory, but whatever, i can live with it.

i think we should just leave springtrap out entirely. the only presence of william should be in vanny’s head, since the entire point of the new fnaf games was to move on from william afton anyway. 

also bring back chica’s old voice lines! she had a different accent in some of the game files, and there are mods that bring those back. i think they give her more character rather than just being chicken and female. and fat as hell despite not being fat.

we need more of the blob. im not sure how we could do it, but i really think he’s underused. maybe we only actually see what he looks like at the very end of the game, but his tentacles being around or trying to attack you throughout the game could be really cool.

the reveal of vanny in the real game was boring as hell. just looping gif of vanessa on a tv turns into looping gif of vanny and then she comes in. i think it should’ve happened while we’re in a vent or something, and we see her putting the mask on while talking to william in her head. there should also be that feeling of the pizzaplex slowly being taken over, like maybe screens that used to have normal promotional stuff on them now having pictures of vanny, or just showing repeating words somewhat relating to william or the virus n that.

less staffbots please. they are so annoying. i don’t hate their presence, they’re just spammed everywhere and its so annoying.

after you get the good ending (might not be the true ending?), you should be able to go back during the day time where there’s no staff bots or threats, and you can just walk about and do what you like. get all the collectibles you missed, play monty golf, fazer blast and mazercise all you want. also maybe you can go get all the princess quest machines or the other ones you missed. i know having a day section would be really hard for an actual game because there would supposedly be a LOT of people there, but maybe just claim that the place just opened, so nobody’s here yet? or just don’t bother with making it make sense like that. i just hate the post game we did get, where its still night time despite being past 6am, and there’s still STAFF BOTS EVERYWHERE.


most importantly, give vanny a GIGANTIC A-


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