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Lipstick

Posted by jun ☆

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Her kiss was poison, 
And I was the rodent.
I fell dead onto the floor in agony,
While she stood above me with a grin.

The lipstick she wore was red,
Perfectly on par with her heart.
For her blood was tainted,
But no warning signs were near.

“Danger, danger!” Cried her husband,
“Danger, danger!” Cried her soulmate,
“Danger, danger!” Cried her bachelor,
But all of those cries drifted into murmurs.

I didn’t see the road ahead,
For she had blinded me with her charm,
All I saw was her,
And her narrow, sly smirk. 

That was not lipstick at all.


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Reply by Nina Bean <3

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This is really good!


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Reply by Mortem

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I LOVE IT


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Reply by Alice

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i Love this!! i love the effect of the last line!


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Reply by 卂丂卄ㄥㄚ几

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Oh god, this is so good fr


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Reply by R I N A>_<

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this was absolutely amazing, i love the way you use descriptive words, it helped me feel as if it happened to me, or as if i was there to witness it. 


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