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Leave me alone

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"Leave me alone!" she told her mom
as tears were rolling down her face.
"Leave me alone!" she told her best friend
as tears were rolling down her face.
"Leave me alone!" she told her boyfriend
as tears were rolling down her face.
"Leave me alone!" she told her husband
as tears were rolling down her face
"Leave me alone!" she told her children
as tears were rolling down her face.
"Its time for me to leave" she told her grandchildren
as tears were rolling down their face.


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Reply by Nina Bean <3

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Dude this is really good! I loved the repetition and how it still had feeling and depth!!!


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Reply by Alice

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i love the repetition in the poem and how it could represent the fact that they can hear the constant phrase over and over again, and how its repeating in their head.


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