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If you want to, you can send your own poetry too, here is one of my own written stuff :) It's inspired from Annabel Lee from Edgar Allan Poe.


A white corset, so purified and clear, a loved white rose,
she lived in a never dissolving blooming nature, hauled me, presence, swayed away my tears
The river, a tranquillity place, my body lives in harmony while you're so close
Seeing you, release from my burdens, not anymore, a life with fear
 
This is your clear aspiration, always meant to be,
She is named, my angel, Marion Eve
 
 
Thy gift, your hair, golden, long wonderful shine
Thy world was a too pitiful place, your heart in my indebted hand,
a sweet small, young face, granted with gorgeous blue eyes
This place was not for your kind, red lips, my fretted demand
 
Your beautiful purpose, a lucky faith meant to be,
rarely heard name, she is Marion Eve
 
 
Surely, can say my feelings were taken away,
it's your fault didn't plan drifting my whole life for you
Nothing negative, you snatched the branches which covered my light
I'm serious till this day, focus was not anymore written in signs
 
But you made the impossible reachable for me,
sharing emotions, what would I do without you, Marion Eve (edited)
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Spied, I bravely listened the disintegrating  nature,
chaotic, truly a wild tornado, harmful danger
 
I was scared for your kind, we both live in a broken demise
 
Their ugly, greedy face,
it's not okay,
they caught you in a treadmill full of pain
 
Your parents normally acted in equity,
hands turned to sand,
the air strict, like a sack with a rope bundled up tightly,
oh wonderful never ending land
 
I'm sorry your portrait broke apart,
still searching for the image pieces in thy dark
 
Because you're my inner peace,
my missing piece, Marion Eve
 
Stories about you, catching my breath, whom let my brain state in unconscious
It needs to be true, your soul can't be in despair, ferocious
Myself, never experienced the hideous love, which we get told
Tomorrow is the birth of our own spoken words,
Anxious about it, can I resist against your heat when my heart is so cold
Or will it end in a repugnant morbidness, turning me in a black bird

Question after Question which keeping my pressure sane,
prepared everything, there is no possibility you would run away
 
Because you feel the same love that I experience with you, me
You will understand me better, Marion Eve
 
 
I'm sorry Marion Eve for the spreading mud on your corset,
thought of spending our time quiet, near the river, hand in hand
Marion Eve you need to do something, impolite you know how to act,
 don't lose your lovely smile!
I'm begging you, my life wasn't that easy, stop, stop it, don't let the diamonds prickle in little part which I can't replace
 It’s my fault, I already got sacrificed, I'm being forced living in this cabin where nullity is over the dark
 Please just one time, just one second Marion, fill my heart, please don't fade, just lighten up, lighten up this room of my enviousness with your hand
 
The reality now becomes visible, my eyes blessed with a last look besides the river,
 a romantic end, the floating body stops to shiver.


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