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:-3 here we can post poems and give feedback to each other. If you are open to feedback, put a //f// at the bottom of your poem, if not you can just leave it as is <333 ty I look forward to reading them and posting my own soon <333


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Reply by Necrosunderground

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*taps microphone*

Hey, is this thing on?

We still doing poetry?


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Reply by xxstarxx

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yes, we are still active!! :)


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Reply by Koishic

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Is this still active?


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Reply by xxstarxx

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Yes!!! This is still active <3 


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Reply by mIeNlFP

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If only I was just like them.

Flying through times like leaves in the breeze;

I could enjoy life with ease.

Maybe even love the little things?

Wondering if my psyche is acting up?

Or is it acting on its surroundings?

Is it depression if you know what you're depressed about?

I mean there is a lot to be depressed about.

I have been thinking about the freedom of happiness;

Once the side effects are knocked out; 

And that sweet chemical kicks in.

Though I don’t know if it’s real.

Maybe the few things that made me happy will be gone.

I’m not sure if the things humans do are inhumane.

Or is it my mind to blame?

Maybe my perspective is warped?

Is it true I choice how I feel?

I don’t know if I should enjoy the little things.

Or maybe happiness is just too little?


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