pls read this first chapter I made and please tell me if you liked it or not

{CHAPTER ONE} ''Animal..'' thought the psychologist of the criminal mind in his own dark twisted head- even more twisted than the ones he tried to fix- more darker, though, more dangerous, for he could think these thoughts and not act on them but still think them- oh, what a dangerous man he was- a man able to-... feign sympathy for the monsters that he hated.|

''You Animal, you think that I won't judge you like the others..'' he thought as the patient unleashed his crimes that he committed out from his mouth and into the psychologist's ears.

''Dogs, animals, wolves bears and rats..'' thought the psychologist. ''Even these vermin have better self control than this beast in front of me..''

{THE END OF CHAPTER ONE}