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Goth poems

This is goth poems about toxic love where the symbol is Satan. Im not good at writing poems and this is my first one since a year ago, and it's the first time im writing it in the gothic style, but I hope you'll like it at least a little bit<33


 poem under the title "Lucifer of Love"


"I beheld your eyes,

Dark thresholds, shadowed,

Soaked in a devil's might,

Forged from a blackened sperk


In the guise of the fiend,

Born of fury and complexity, 

Bound in shrouds unbroken,

To a soul defiled-

Lucifer, of love


From blood of the living, heart of the dead,

With the soul of the fallen, body violated,

Beyond hell's blazing gates,

Beyond the servants of Satan


When the heart ceased its beating,

All signs of life withdrew, 

And love collapsed-

From infernal depths below,

A demon emerged 


Eblis, you grasped my bloodless hand-

Once your beloved,

A desecrated lover,

Love's recent foe


But not enduring-

No longer 


Traces once burning 

With love,

Desire,

Lust,

Extinguished in impermanence 


Now only scars remain-

Etched in enduring trauma."


Thank you for reading my poem. It may not sound rhythmic because the original was written in Polish, and in my language everything rhymes, but I hope you still like it<3


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Reply by Sakenoto

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This is beautiful!??

Everything about this is very well done. I adore the symbolism and the fact that its translated doesn't at all affect the poem.

Hopefully I can see more!♡♡


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