« Writing and Poetry Forum

𐙚⋆°｡⋆♡𝓜𝔂 𝓯𝓲𝓻𝓼𝓽 𝓹𝓸𝓮𝓶 𝓽𝓮𝓱𝓮𝓱𝓮𝓱𝓮𐙚⋆°｡⋆♡

★ᯓ𝒢𝒪𝑅𝒢𝐸𝐿𝐿𝒜-𝒯𝐻𝐸-𝐸𝑀𝒫𝑅𝐸𝒮𝒮ᯓ★'s profile picture

Posted by ★ᯓ𝒢𝒪𝑅𝒢𝐸𝐿𝐿𝒜-𝒯𝐻𝐸-𝐸𝑀𝒫𝑅𝐸𝒮𝒮ᯓ★

posted

Forum: Writing and Poetry

View Topics View Profile

    ⁺‧₊˚ ཐི⋆♱Ꮖ ᑎᗴᗴᗪ ᗩ ᛕᑎᏆᖴᗴ♱⋆ཋྀ ˚₊‧⁺

                                                                        

ᗪᗩ丅ᗴ: ੦Դ/੨੪/੨੦੨Ƽ

丅Ƴᑭᗴ:丅ᖇIᗝᒪᗴ丅

I ᑎEEᗪ ᗩ KᑎIᖴE. (ᗩ)


ᖴOᖇ ᖴOᖇEᐯEᖇ, I’ᐯE ᖴEᒪT ᗰY ᔕOᑌᒪ ᗷEIᑎG ᑕᖇᑌᔕᕼEᗪ ᗷY ᒪᗩYEᖇᔕ Oᖴ ᖴᗩT. (ᗷ)


ᖴEᗪ TO ᗰE ᗷY ᑭEOᑭᒪE ᗯᕼOᔕE ᔕEᒪᖴ ᕼᗩᗪ ᒪOᑎG ᗪIEᗪ, ᖇEᑭᒪᗩᑕEᗪ ᗯITᕼ ᗯᕼᗩT TᕼEY ᗷEᒪIEᐯEᗪ TO ᗷE ᖇIGᕼT. (ᗩ)


I ᑎEEᗪ ᗩ KᑎIᖴE (ᗩ)


TO ᑕᑌT ᖴᖇEE ᗰY ᒪIᖴE ᗰOᑌᒪᗪIᑎG ᑌᑎᗪEᖇ TᕼE TOᑌᑕᕼ Oᖴ ᑭᑌTᖇIᗪ ᗰEᗩT ᔕᑕᖇEᗩᗰIᑎG ᗯITᕼ ᔕTᖇIᖴE. (ᗩ)  


I ᔕᕼᗩᒪᒪ ᗷE ᖴOᖇᑕEᗪ TO ᔕᒪIᑕE TᕼᖇOᑌGᕼ ᒪᗩYEᖇ ᗩᖴTEᖇ ᒪᗩYEᖇ Oᖴ ᗰEᗩTY ᖇᗩTIOᑎᗩᒪITY, ᐯEIᑎY IᑎᔕEᑕᑌᖇITIEᔕ ᗩᑎᗪ

 ᗷOᑎY IᗪEOᒪOGIEᔕ. TᕼIᑎGᔕ ᔕO ᐯEᖇY ᗩᗷᔕTᖇᗩᑕT. (ᗷ)


I ᑎEEᗪ ᗩ KᑎIᖴE (ᗩ)


EᒪᔕE, I’ᒪᒪ ᗷE ᗪOOᗰEᗪ TO ᑕOᑎᔕᑌᗰE ᖴOᖇ ETEᖇᑎITY ᑎOTᕼIᑎG ᗷᑌT ᔕᑕᖇᗩᑭᔕ Oᖴ ᗰY ᑭEᖇᔕOᑎ ᒪIKE ᗩ ᖇᗩT. (ᗷ)



Report Topic

2 Replies

Sort Replies:

⋆｡‧˚ʚ Elio ɞ˚‧｡⋆'s profile picture

Reply by ⋆｡‧˚ʚ Elio ɞ˚‧｡⋆

posted

tfw your flesh is nothing more than a rotting cage and its mass disgusts you, and the people who "gifted" it to you feel like your very own Judas Iscariot

I should go to sleep

jokes aside, very freeform, your language is wonderfully evocative. I think speaking so candidly about bodies and meat, something we all (willing or unwilling) have and understand, is a lovely way to wedge into someone's gut and force them to feel your words. kudos! 


Permalink Report Reply

ivan's profile picture

Reply by ivan

posted

"ᖴEᗪ TO ᗰE ᗷY ᑭEOᑭᒪE ᗯᕼOᔕE ᔕEᒪᖴ ᕼᗩᗪ ᒪOᑎG ᗪIEᗪ, ᖇEᑭᒪᗩᑕEᗪ ᗯITᕼ ᗯᕼᗩT TᕼEY ᗷEᒪIEᐯEᗪ TO ᗷE ᖇIGᕼT."

i like this line! reminds me of how the ideas of older generations fight to stay in the present, and end up affecting newer generations with their skewed values.

very cool poem and font :>


Permalink Report Reply