Looking for Feedback

Hey y'all,

I am writing a horror story right now and would really like some feedback on the story. It does have some heavy topics right of the bat so I'll leave the Tigger list here and a summary. Please DM me if your intrested.

TW:

Suicide, SA, Self-harm, Derealization (If there are more that I haven't listed I apologize please let me know and I will update the list)

Summary:

This is a story from when I was in middle school and high school doing the stupidest thing I have ever done in my life. I tried to summon a demon to possess me when I was 13. It did not go as I thought it would, as I watched my life be stripped from me within a week. Hopefully my story will serve as a warning to others not to mess with forces you no nothing about and cannot hope to control.