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"A possible prevention for a society in ruins" a cautionary poem for a world in humanitarian pain

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Whuts good yall! This was a poem that I had written on Feb 2nd 2025. The expression of this poem was possible through the maddening motivation I had felt (and continue to feel) for this world on that given day. This poem goes through various subjects of societal practices and namely the importance of educational concepts (those that don't mystify into a consensus of bias or resentment), if you have any take-aways or interpretations from the words that I speak of, please drop a duce in this forum page's comment field. anyways please enjoy and "stay hood".

Prevention For A Society In Ruins

The problems subjected to the youth of our future will be the result of your (the oppressors) ignorance and your uncertainty. Maybe take a seat and have a thought about what is it your trying to accomplish in the long run, humans with no goal of being any sort of extremist have written proverbs and concepts about the manifestation of fairness, balance, community, and care - over thousands and thousands of years, and as we advance back to the resulting biosphere of corruption we see that you have completely ignored the valid calls of normal, instead favoring the money-driven propagation, ever enacting on a stupid lie driven to maximize a concept designed to destroy your and our own brethren, it's crazy how you still haven't conceptualized the years of communicated untainted evidence that the wellbeing of our people is important, even as far back into your childhood; the idea of people wanting to be happy was a vibrant consensus that communities, cities and most countries WANTED. But now you spend your time like billions of people fighting for your own entitlement, to own the facade of "being tough" as an excuse to sit on your own ass! We have to be resilient to the utterly-idiotic, even in an environment so unfair and corrupted it's practically destroyed. For the next generation's fundamental concepts and atmospheric pillars lie on either a constant imbalance from the fighting we have to prove, or a constant downfall from the giving up of our visions and goals we needed for morality. Most of the faithful are now fighting for a corrupted good tainted by our ideas of greed, and even that will lead to an imbalanced culture - but it's the only unspoken risk we have to take in order for our children to have at least a better life expectancy, for it is the only good left in our society of controlled hell. For whatever outcome our conscious will drive, the people also need to remember the true importance of teachings and lesson, we need to teach our children morals, practices and rules for various vital topics such as community, manner and culture, we need to entertain our children with conceptual outlets that don't damage the vision of societal good and understanding, we need to love our children with the compassion more developed than the last of our own guardians, and above all else we need to instill the persistence and care for our children in order to be prepared for any destruction of the figurative and physical world. For the tides of a corrupted land will always change direction, usually it's most rusted towards the worst and some blessed towards the great - Understand that the corrupted good of eventual imbalance can and will be better than a society in ruins.


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