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twt poem draft

Posted by mayo

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turning my pockets inside out

spilling out

when my heartbeat moves my arms

spiked and rapid, trembling terrified

can anything ease that chill

i want it out

rushing through and under me

how many times

like dry heaving 

my throat hurts

my stomach hurts

you hurt 


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Reply by Zahra

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its so good wtf mind reeling indeed


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Reply by Vyobid

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LOVEE ITT, describes a combination of emotions that I can't name

Love the ending and simplicity of the poem


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