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my most recent poem ^_^ pls give me ideas on what to name it !

putting on a nice dress
as though you're wrapping up a wound
trying to find the girl you once were
in pink frills and glitter lashes
but it doesn't wash away your sins
and bandages won't fix cracked porcelain
instead it cuts everything you touch

you look up
the sky is empty
no god will clean you pure 
you can't take a soul from a soulless body anyway 
you sold it to the nymph


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Reply by Anastasia

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This is fantastic! I love your comparisons, and the pictures you provide are beautifully tragic. Great work!


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Reply by SlightBonk42

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You could play with buttefly/chrysallus imagery for sure. 


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