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The Lights (poetry)

Each streetlamp seems to connect to my gaze

The skin of my cheek presses against the chilling glass of the car window

The soft vibrations of the car put me into a deep sleep

Yet even within my dreams I still hold eye contact with the lights

The bright flashes hitting my cool dead skin infinitely

My eyes forever lay open as my body leaves me


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Reply by asa

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this is so pretty <3


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Reply by 4nn13773

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I love the poems that just make you feel surrounded by what the author is describing, and make you feel by all the senses. Amazing poem, I write some too, wanna be friends? We could exchange some!


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Reply by fbijailhouse

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i like your poems! you should definitely put more like these on your blog


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