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it kinda suckz but im tryin, and im still workin on it but we're getting somwhere i guess
any tips would be lovely. i might tjust end up rewriting it
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letz go i wrote a thing
Posted by πβ έβ οΉ ποΉyney πππ ΰΎΰ½² ββ β‘
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Reply by Xx_Cherie_xX
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imo this is great !Β
try inserting a gasp-grapper somewhere. like smth that is pressuring the reader.
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Reply by Oma
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