I wander as I go,
In this fathomless fight.
When I get there, I'll know.
I stand, ages ago,
Drowning in my own plight.
I wander as I go.
Looking for any show,
And a marvelous light.
When I get there, I'll know.
I hold all of this woe,
And hope to send it in flight.
I wander as I go.
And I fear I plateau
Upon my mournful blight.
When I get there, I'll know.
So, I keep myself low,
In this dangerous night.
I wander as I go.
When I get there, I'll know.
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tattooing this on my brain hold on📝
seriously love this! usually not the biggest fan of repetition in poetry but this is done well! it flows nicely
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thank you very much!
I'm usually not a fan of repetition either, but I can appreciate it when used correctly
my poem, I think, is the correct use of repetition, where it adds to the meaning
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