This Is 4 Janes Story (Sryy If Im not right I haven't heard her story In a long time :P)
I would Make It so that Jeff had a Friendcrush on her instead of a "Crush".
I would make it so that after jeff is put In the hospital, Jane feels bad 4 him, and trys to visit himm.
I would make It that Jane gets home late and dosent see her family dead, But when she wakes up In the night, Shes traped In a chair with all her family members boddies straped to the chairs!
And yeah.. thats rlly It Lol! I hope u have a great day! :3