I've been writing a series about a trans girl going through middle school who gets wrapped up in something supernatural with an audience range of 11+. This chapter in particular I'm having troubles with in terms of content. Is it too much? I'm trying to balance the line of not too sanitized but not too violent to break the rating and this is what I've come up with. Thoughts?
Here's my book series on kindle. It's available for free through the Kindle unlimited system. It's also up on my deviantart.