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it’s midnight and I’m emotional this is abt my friend

I hope he finds people like us

And I hope he forgets about me 

And I hope they treat him well

And I hope someone helps him

And I hope he knows I love him

And I hope he knows we’ll meet again


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Reply by marian michel

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awesome work man<33


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Reply by xXRawr_SaurusXx

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I really like your brevity and the repeating on each line, like a hammer strikes a nail. When I read it, it does show me raw emotion, especially when the perspective shifts from wanting another to forget them, to the opposite; it tells me that this perspective has a volatility that can cast another/more meanings to the piece apart from face value that can come with shorter pieces. Good job!:)


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Reply by ghosty🫖

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THANK YOU SMN!!!  It’s really simple but I’m glad you like it tAGNWIWGQVQB TY


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Reply by ghosty🫖

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THANK YOU SMN!!!  It’s really simple but I’m glad you like it tAGNWIWGQVQB TY


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Reply by jude rigor

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i love this. short, but raw emotions.


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