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Please love me mom

Posted by Gerda

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Please love me Momm

I know you hate me

I would plead to love you

If I did,

But I can't 


Please love me, Mom

I know you hate me

I hate you to 

You force me to love you

I hate you


Please love me, mother

I wish to have mother

You are great

But I hate you


Please love me ,legal guardian

I wish to have a mother

I wish to have a bond


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Reply by estrodjinn

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good poem! this reminds me of a spoken word poem i heard a few years ago; 'sometimes i feel like a motherless child'


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Reply by smoralescarrie

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This poem is deeply emotional and speaks to the pain of longing for love, connection, and acceptance—especially from a parental figure. The shift from pleading to anger and then to sorrow is powerful and heartbreaking. It reminds us that love, when withheld or forced, can leave deep emotional wounds. In contrast, expressing love freely—like sharing frases de amor para mi esposo—can be healing and affirming in relationships where mutual care and respect exist.


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