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writing rap songs

annyeong guys >.< i am an avid rap song writer as i want to one day debut in SM entertainment as a rapper like minho sunbaenim and fulfil my dreams of being the best kpop idol EVERRRRRR!!! XDDDD

will someone read my lyrics i wrote and maybe u guys can comment some of ur own bars!!


this is my song called 'I AM THE RICHEST UNNIE EVER!!!'

hello little b!tch- oh my
what’s this

look at my bank account

oh jinja im so rich

 

everywhere i walk, all
dem oppas say hi

sorry I cant help it

like my private jet- im
fly

 

breaking out a sweat

uh oh its getting hotter

when im in the premises
why does anybody bother

 

walking out the door
throwing my money everywhere

laughing at the homeless

dead face

blank stare

 

*pennys rattling sound
but in beat of music*

 

HUH WHATS THIS?

LOOSE CHANGE?

YALL WOKE UNNIES WANA
CHANGE ME? (WHAT??)

STAY BLAND

 

JUST CUZ YA’ CANT AFFORD
MY DRIP

GET OUT THE WAY OF MA
WHIP (UUR URR)

NOW IM GONA SPEND MY
MONEYS

ON THOSE OPPAS WHO WILL
STR*P

 

*reverse beat noise
effect thing*

 

(honk honk)

uh yeah, im in my miata (mx5)

passanger princess, in
the next seat (my ride)

touch my jagi, get
wacked, you pinyata (ouch)

ill make you scream,
while my oppas watch, sit and holler

 

im not niced out

im iced out

my mx5 is hot, not riced
out

oh yeah im so asian

got the rice out

when I see your girl im
like nihao’

she only wants me, and my
meat now’

 

breaking out a sweat

uh oh its getting hotter

im rich in yen pounds won
and dollar

 

over run with money- got
no need to care

laughing at the homeless

dead face









































































































blank stare


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LOVE IT UNNIE! partly because i wrote some of it!

hows this?


thats my miata you see in the vid

my coins and notes too, youre so fricking mid

me and me hoe hop in the miat

who knew you were such a biatch


(ring ring ring) whos that calling?

not mia fada - shes not balling 

makes raps about being rich 

turns out shes just a witch

can afford a phone plan

cant even get a man


uses my wealth to get street cred

in reality, to poverty you are wed


wont let me rap in my own song

mia fada you are hella wrong

uses my lyrics and my flow

i asked for credits SHE SAID NO!


so yeah guys this is just a little sneak peak of what i can write, dont let this MF (lol) take your raps like she did to me!!! JK GUYS this is all just a little fun, id never go against mia! (help me)


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Reply by rosydam

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Your generosity knows no bounds, and for that, I am eternally thankful. Thank you for your selflessness and for making suika game the world a better place.


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Reply by Mikasa Ackerman

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Your rap song showcases your creativity and unique style. Keep honing your skill and pursuing your fnf dream, and you will continue to grow as an artist. 


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Reply by dankmt

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it'll be cool if you could record and release this 


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Reply by Owen Hughes

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I gotta admit, I was nervous about getting a refurbished phone at first.  All those stories about sketchy quality and terrible battery life!  But then my friend convinced me to try it, and let me tell you, I'm a total convert now.  Saved a ton on a phone that looks and works flawlessly.  Just do yourself a favor and get a screen protector –  better safe than sorry on those precious pixels


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