Critique? Criticism! Tips! pls

Honestly, I like the feeling this gives me, since I felt it a bunch of times. To me it describes that sort of "bland" sadness, that sometimes its not even sadness, its more like nothing, something bland, something without color, I guess. 

Poetry that emits a feeling or feelings is very pretty, and what u wrote it defently describes a feeling like this. It sounds like sadness covered with exaustion. I can't give criticism bcs I dont know much about poetry myself, or how to write it. But I liked this 

Yea I didn't know how to describe that kind of sadness besides extreme boredness or nothing . At times when I feel that I wish to feel anger or sadness just anything but nothing